Hi,
Glad I could help! I'm looking forward to seeing the character sheet.
Typically periods go inside the quotation marks. Example pg. 7 or simply a "Calling." At least in America -not sure if other countries do this differently.
Pg. 11 it looks like there is a double space between "have a" and "maximum" in the Max Resolve description.
Anyway that's all I caught!
Logan
Hey! I love your bug game! You've created such a fun, little world, and I really enjoy the d4,d6,d8 promote/demote system. Was this adapted from something or an original design? I also like Emblems and how instead of levels you improve through these items and other treasure. I do have couple questions about the quickstart.
What is Spirit? It's only mentioned in the description for rest, but I don't know what recovering half my Spirit means.
Will there be a character sheet included in the quickstart in the future?
Also I found a few typos I'd be happy to share if you would find that helpful.
Best of luck on the Kickstarter!
Logan
Hi everybody! I just ran my first session of Advanced Dungeon Goons and absolutely loved the system. It was fast paced, easy to use, and incredibly engaging. My players enjoyed the classless design, the deadly threat of combat, and Conjurers were excited to create a unique mage of any theme or element. In addition, the style and layout of this booklet is fantastic. It reminds me of a nostalgic old video game and taps into that wild, new, and inspiring feeling of first discovering a world of adventure. That being said, I did have some feedback on a few of the rules.
Shields -No description of function in Equipment section, but in the example in the Attacking section, it says shields provide +1 to Action Rolls.
Dodging -Attackers don't roll, so I believe this means to say Dodging adds 2 to the player's defend roll -not subtracting 2 from the attacker's roll.
Attacking -The concept that players can loose HP when attacking was a little unclear. The last sentence in the attacking example states that, but I just found it a little confusing as written.
Spell Attacks -The rules for spell attacks was unclear to me. If a Conjurer wanted to cast a damaging spell, would they spend a spell usage and roll an Action Roll to attack using Sage? For using a scarce resource like a spell usage, it doesn't seem like the damage would be worth it compared to a normal attack. Maybe this is by design and spells are better suited for non-damaging effects.
Character Sheet -My players thought it would be nice to have a spot on the character sheet to record your Attack and Defend bonuses.
Again, I absolutely loved Advanced Dungeon Goons and wanted to share my feedback for the system and to encourage others to try it out. Happy adventuring!
Logan
